Thanks for making this VN! In terms of tone, atmosphere, and visual direction, it’s honestly pretty special to me, and the religious community you’ve portrayed feels very believable, problematic trans integration and all. To me there’s also a very unsettling aura here that works well with the main character’s recent trauma - and to foreshadow the situation at the convent. I also love the poetic/prayerful language you use to convey Mala’s inner emotional turmoil.
Also… I am very much taking a liking to Casna, even though I also recognize the red flags as of the end of day two.~ I can understand why Mala told her big sister everything’s fine there… Additionally given that Velika seems remorseful over what she did, I’m really curious to find out more about her!
Anyways, great work and I look forward to reading more!