Yeah, I agree with Dareka Devu. (The person below me) Adding choices would increase interactivity of your visual novel.
Other than that, story-wise...damn...that was quite depressing. I guess this shows the tragedy of a lonely person trying to find companionship, only to be betrayed for someone else's greed.
I honestly feel conflicted about the art, it kinda seems unpolished, yet somewhat charming? Idk. However, you clearly put in the effort making a unique UI for the Renpy engine, good work.
All in all, a short and decent depressing visual novel with an esoteric art style.
Edit: Mistake in words