I must say, I really liked this conclusion, that Mylo and Baxter managed to finally talk it our properly, and nice reference to When I Knew You. Makes me consider downloading that to know what happened before and how this novel connected to that.
All in all, I love this story so much...and I'll wait for the next novel you have planned. :D
Quick question though, what are those 3 photos atop the CGs of Mylo during the beginning parts of the story? :o