I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (3):
I don’t think I was expecting expanding of philosophies and prejudice to be how someone interpreted the theme but I’m glad you did. It’s not something I was expecting with an art style like this.
Story (1):
It was short and sweet but all of the talk that was happening in the made up language bumped this down by quite a bit.
Presentation (3):
The art style was something that I really jived with. I’m big fan of no outlines and thick outlines too. The backgrounds are adorable.
Creativity (2):
This VN had this unique casual vibe to it. It’s just two people talking at a park. Very homey.
Total (9):
I did notice that you changed the title to “(Jam Version)” but I have no how you plan on making this story longer. I mean, I said the same thing about Please Don’t Kill Me Jacob, which did get a longer remake. Whatever you decide on, I’ll be playing eventually, just please don’t delete this itch.io page.
Bonus points for having a bearcat as your MC and predicting the bearcat discrimination that would faced in NovemBEAR.