I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (2):
The expanding of assets was the interpretation that I could mustard from this. This is the VN that hurt its Rankings the most with its implementation of theme.
Story (4):
Man, I just feel bad for all the characters. Perhaps playing this VN after the United Health Care CEO was assassinated makes it hit different in a good way. I just want to give every character a hug and a mostly metaphorical gun.
I had no idea you had this kind of writings skills within you considering I just knew you at that goober on the Echo Server that doodles sometimes before the Jam.
Capitalism do sucks sometimes.
Bernie 2028! 😭
Presentation (4):
Out of every new Developer who debuted their first VN project, you’re the one that I wish the most was open for commissions. But you seem to be focused more on making Fursuits now. Which now that I’m thinking, I’ve never seen a VN that uses digitized Fursuits to tell its story.
Every character oozes with their personality through your art. I can taste the cigarette smoke on them.
Using Torahiko as a character was quaint and counteracted having to use one of the Pre-Made Sprite for the cashier. I would have just not given him a sprite at all at that point for consistency.
Creativity (4):
How you were able to find a real card game that just enough people knew how to play that some people could explain it while others, including myself, were lost—is a feat in itself! If I have to replay this, I’ll be sure to play the game live with other people while doing so.
Thank you for contributing to the bearcat FVN takeover.
This is one of the most creative uses of side sprites that I’ve seen in a VN.
Total (14):
I still find it funny that I got you into this Jam because I accidentally pinged the wrong person on the Echo Discord Server. Or it could have been someone else, lol
Maybe when you get back in to VN’s, you give us the climax we’re all waiting for. For now, keep making those Fursuits!