I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (4):
Finally Vore!
As a Vore Ally, this VN made me very happy. I would be devastated if none had any vore in their submissions.
Story (4):
Very funny as to be expected from you, Mr. Fuzzy Donuts.
Presentation (3):
Did not expect you to use the Pre-Made sprites. I also did not expect someone to use the huge cast of Pre-Made sprites to make them all suspects in a murder but here we are. Overwhelming the play with characters on purpose. Using the MPreg Sprites for vore purposes. chef kiss
Nothing else really stood out besides that. I don’t remember if there was any music or SFX. It would be on brand for you to not have any at all.
Creativity (4):
The most uncreative thing about this VN is the title. I wish there was some exploration parts or choices to determine who the killer was.
Total (15):
You had me so worried Mr. 56 Seconds that you weren’t going to make across the finish line at all. There’s no reason to try to break your record because somehow a NovemBEAR already did it with one second remaining.