I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (5):
An expanding dark hole but not in a NSFW way.
Story (5):
This VN shows grief but it shows acceptance for one’s fate in away that couldn’t be done any other way. Two people who love each other a lot who want to spend their last moments together in eachother’s arms. I know a lot of people don’t like these kind of stories that romanticize the end of the world, but I love them.
Presentation (5):
Everything, except for the engine and the SFX, was made from scratch. The painting the background was super detailed when you didn’t have to go that far.
The music at the end was what had me in tears.
Creativity (5):
There was so much creativity here that it created a bigger hole in my heart that still yearns to be filled
Total (20):
This is the shortest entry to get a perfect score from me. There’s not much more I can say. I’m actually somewhat glad that you decided on not having an NSFW scene because as you said, or said something along the lines, you couldn’t find a good place for it fit. I didn’t understand that at the time, but it’s very obvious what you meant now.
Even writing this Jam Comments after marathoning all of these, recounting this one in my head still makes me teary eyed.