Okay...so...i triad...and i quit...sorry...but what the hell kinda stupid start is thst?! I was bired just reading it...mc is stupid talking about house age and hiw hes a nobody and has no girls and useing the bathroom on my time? The hell is wrong with you? You think i give a damn about his sorry loser boring ass? Okay its not that serious but you see where im going with this? You dont start a game by boring the player to the point of deleting the game...its so freaking boring!!! So yeah best of luck i guess i dont wanna go through that much time of boredom got way better games to play.
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped