Here is my feedback:
1. How do you find the mechanics?
Easy, peasy
2. Is the artwork visually appealing?
Very nice artwork! Only the photo on the fridge should not be a perfect rectangle.
3. Are there mechanical bugs?
Hint: You have to play in fullscreen mode!
4. Is the story and pacing engaging, so far?
Just doing the cleaning up is not so much fun :-P. But thereare plenty possibiltities the game can develop to.
5. Is this your style of game? If yes could you see yourself playing more? if no? Would you be interested in more story?
Sorry to say but visual novels and point and click adventures are absoultely not my genre. But that is just me, of course.