only criticism I have is there a bit to much talking between new scenes and sometime get little boring like take much time taking amount unnecessary stuff in my opinion and maby add more expressions and still pics showing what’s happening that moment art other then that like where it’s going
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Hey dood! (*ΦωΦ*)
I'm sorry about finding some aspects of the story boring to your tastes.
Being a visual novel focused on slice of life, i'm trying to focus more on the narrative, relationships and worldbuilding, just to not jump in directly to the hot stuff and making the flow of the narrative more natural.
Despite that i get what are you saying and i'll try to go more straight forward and drain some narrative. ＾▽＾