All right there we go feedback time.
Vocals: Sounds nice musically, I think It would be nice if you record even more layer of the same voice maybe add a bit of chorus like 20% to create a more stereo effects and it will also make it sound a bit more present.
Percussions : Its more present than your previous tracks you made which is fantastic. You can probably boost in the EQ the bass frequency like 1-2 db and put some sidechain compression to let is pass.
Pluck instruments (I don't remember the name) : Clearly too distant, make it more dominant, you can also double it a bit put lots of reverb on the double track and lower in volume to add a "room" effect on it.
Overall piece : I like the build up, but I was expecting maybe a little rythmic change especially in the middle and maybe some chord changes, well the chords are changing but because the drums is at the same time the bass we're staying modal. It can stay modal i'm just saying it could have at least one time a satisfying chord change.
Roast done.