Very fun album, the mix on most of the tracks is in the mid - low mid I think you just need to balance those and it will help a lot. First track is also I think played a bit too robotically. I think the holy bread is great but the vocal synths is too much in your face and it shows, when you have the budget hire a real vocalist it would be much much better but for the meantime we deal with what we have and its perfectly acceptable.
Apart from thats its a nice mix of texture and different composition, good job.
Don't be too offended by the feedback I went all in since its unranked :)
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