This was really sweet Laxy, I love that a lot of your stories have this core of parents and children and often this longing feeling, or being caught up in some bigger conflict and seeing it through one small point of view. I watched Hawk play and I also played through it, I was going to make a video but frankly, I have a hard time reading your text. It really triggers my dyslexia and it's hard to read it out loud. If you don't feel comfortable proof reading more thoroughly, there are resources out there, either Fiver or asking a friend or someone on discord.
I agree with Hawks complaints about the contrast, it is just hard to see in some areas. And for whatever artistic choice that is, it's making the game harder to get through and then people won't want to get through your nice story if they're put off by things like the contrast, eye strain or typos. I think your world building and mood here is excellent and the contrast and typos is a consistent problem you have with your games, I hope that if you find ways to fix those issues your games can appeal to a much bigger audience! People like sweet games with cool lore, world building and relatable cute main characters! You have a lot going for you, don't be afraid to make changes!