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Thanks for your comments! Nozomi's route is the one I'm least happy with because the game's expanded so much since it was written and it doesn't really do what it needs to anymore. So, there's a major rewrite in the works and the "Kyou nearly kills his dream girl because he let his curiosity get the better of him" scene might not even survive. I know you're not the only reader who had a problem with it. But anyway, although there won't be anything too explicit (Penlight kinda set out its stall as being not that type of game) I'm expecting to add a lot more to Kyou and Nozomi's story as they explore their needs amidst the growing realization of the penlight's true abilities~

Working sexual tension into the other girl's routes is more difficult (the interplay with Sayori's alter may be as good as it gets), but it might come up in one of the many variations of both of their routes. I still have a lot to do before this game is finished!

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I second that I'd like an alternative to the breath-holding at that point. I see on the path map that you've made a note to add an escape option at that point, and I'm very curious to see where that leads.

That said, I feel like "Kyou nearly kills his dream girl because he let his curiosity get the better of him" is 100% on-theme for Penlight. I do want to see chances to indulge, but I personally enjoy the "...and feel guilty about it" side of the game too. The moments when "reality ensues" add something to it, though I am having trouble describing what that exactly is right now.