Hi. So I tried your AVN and I wanted to let you know my thoughts on it.
I liked most of it. I liked the story and especially the characters. Lady Steel was my favorite although I liked most of the characters for one reason or another.
I also thought the quality of your graphics was excellent. The character models you used were unique for the most part. A lot of AVNs use stock models, I couldn't see any of that in yours.
I also saw a lot I didn't like however.
I'll start with the choices or rather the lack of them. Like a lot of AVNs yours only really had one choice: Do I want to see a particular Lewd or skip it? Thats what it boils down too.
This a common problem with AVNs, the solution I would suggest would be to add in some actual deviation in the story... perhaps a choice on resisting the MTF and leaving the Sisters behind forever or committing oneself fully to their cause, regardless of the cost.
What really bugged me about this AVN though was the references to other AVNs.
You see I really hate Eternum... so seeing it mentioned a few times really soured my mood. Pissed me off to be honest.
So I'm afraid my impression of your AVN has also suffered... To the point that I could never support your AVN. In fact once I'm done with this review, I'll leave you be.
Lastly I also noticed your spelling and grammar slipped a bit in Chapter 6.
Bye Now.