Well, and i can't stress it enough, damn. What rollercoaster of the plot, in a good sense. Not to mention how impressive the amount of story told in just five chapters. Great art, in both characters and full images. And of course, wonderful choice of music that helps with conveying the mood of a scene(Specially "ResuRection", i used to listen to it so long ago, it was like a hammer to the head to hear it again).
I think the only flaws were lines weren't always assigned correctly and the name of the Doberman guy (like the other guy in the comments have pointed out). But i think that's about it.
Don't think i could've encountered this VN at a more fitting time, with the whole mood of making the best with what you have and people who care about you even with all the shitty world all around.
Not a VN i will forget any time soon.