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Ok Soo uhhhmmmmmm i found this game while i was checking on other games to study what do they do wrong and what do they do right to see if its yay or nay you get me?

This game isn't good, It's just... how do i say this without hurting you? bad, it's bad

My main issue is the progression 

My first 6 minutes, which, on game development, are really important since they exist to let the player know the premise and make them be invested on it, on those 6 minutes, all i did was being stuck on the first part of the game struggling to know where to go, there was NO indication that going to the right on the hallway lead to another room

Which brings me to the next part

The use of sparkles 

Either you use the sparkle things to guide you or you don't, make up your mind

There's ALOT of places that could benefit of having those sparkles that simply don't have them

The writing...

I didn't finish the game, i don't even like Dandy's World that much, it's... fine, although it drags out for long, sometimes, like with the moon guy's (I don't actually know his name) dialogue where he and Sprout just "..." eachother, not even providing ANYTHING and just being a roadblock on the way.

The soundtrack?

Although using Undertale music isn't "wrong" by any means (don't let Materia Collective fool you, Toby Fox allows it), using it, in it's "raw" form (no changes made to it) makes the game don't feel unique, you could have done better you could even soundfont swapped it or something

You know it reminds me of an Undertale fangame called Undertale II: Revenge of the Robots, ANOTHER game made in RPGMaker which i really love due to his humor parodying another games, this game made me singlehandedly appreciate that game more

The animations?

Every single character suffers from goofy wobbling when walking north and south, i thought this was just a mistake for Sprout but every character suffers from it? they move a little to the left and right while on those conditions

The grammar?

Atleast it isn't a typostorm like ANOTHER dandy's world game

I give this game 4/10 

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