Hey Rickalick87, saw your edit (Don't know when you edited this), and thanks for the talk. Rework will be really, really hard, until we get the actual writer to go back on it. We will try, but until then, best we can do is improving the earlier, machine-like translation. But I'm happy you stuck through it, and maybe? enjoyed the later parts of the writing and translation.
Can't promise a sooner improve for the earlier amateurish chapters, those are hard to get, but we certainly can make reading experience less intolerable. And we're doing that right now.
p.s. Been taking your advice, and had new members to join in to help with the editing and such. We're still a learning group, and hope to get there with future chapters and such to redeem our shoddy work in the early parts.
p.p.s Some more feedbacks about story will also be nice. Harsh, nice, whatever, we take it in humbly.