Thank you for responding with so much good grace. I often offer my input to Devs of AVNs and a lot of the time they or their fans respond defensively.
Although I am often quite harsh with the negative side of my criticism, I also try to offer positives simultaneously.
I think too many fans forget that our role is to help writers like yourself to grow in every aspect. That means asking for improvements in all aspects of the project.
Well one thing I like to do when testing out a new AVN is something I like to call my 'Negative Reaction Test'.
It means I go through the whole AVN making every available choice in the most negative way I can. The point is to test out what changes the choices actually make on the story.
Do the characters say anything about the way the choice was handled? Does the AVN skip dialogues or is it exactly the same dialogue regardless of the choice made? (I see this disturbingly often. Characters saying that the MC had sex with a female character when in fact I had not allowed the lewd to take place...)
If I encounter a character I really like or some story element, then I will replay the whole thing making much more positive choices.
