I'm SO glad I finally got around to playing Witness Link
The writing was just plain good, and your prose has a lovely feeling of internet conversationality that I always enjoy in stories :3
The textual descriptions of the mutilation / amputation scene and the... aftermath (:3) felt like absolute revelry. The self-deprication, the guilt, the viscera, everything feels like one disgusting bloodied and cum-stained slab of meat - in the best way possible <3
Additionally, Dizzy's internal thoughts and thought spirals are literally just... how they feel irl and you managed to capture them beautifully. You're so real for that
Lastly, magical girls goind through trauma is never something I'll get tired of. Very swag
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I also read through your Author Notes at the end and agree with your approach! I'm proud of you for getting something out there, even if you had to sacrifice scope and clean project structure in the process. "Placeholders that stuck" is the correct mindset for finishing stuff in game jams, and I would love to see where you take it from here, if you put more dev work into it. Especially possibly character visuals? Would go crazy,,
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Much love