I'm such a Lydia fan that I didn't remember that was even her name! (although i havnt played the game in several weeks and have played 3,476 other AVN's since then (jk jk)
Seriously though, I do have a preference for dark haired girls. Redheads just seem so cliche most of the time....
That said, i love your work so far. It may not be entirely flowing due to the occasional story -glitch (seems to be a result of someone going back to add more branching after having already written sections of it) --- But thats to be expected in any WIP.
Having fun! Enjoying it so far, although I have to wait until you complete 16 i think --- or is that fifteen? *is now confusing himself*
I'm playing the free version, as i take care of my Grandma and dont actually have a paycheck.... So whatever version is next is ... two? updates away for me. I think.
Working on a Multi-Path story myself - although seeing as im on a laptop its all text only right now - cant afford 70 dollars for HS2 and my laptop wouldnt run it in the first place.... So I use twine.
Point being, keep track of all the paths and lines and coding and variables can be a bit taxing - especially in a harem game.
Anyways, I plan on doing a fresh playthrough over all the paths over the next week - I'll track all of the glitches in a text document.
Is there a specific place for me to send it when i get done?
(And obviously - I don't expect to see everything fixed as soon as you get a list. I appreciate what you are doing and understand the strain it can put on a person. It would only be a roadmap for you to use if you wanted to . No expectations or pressure - because hell, you're doing great! Better then I would, to be honest...
I would probably suck at rendering, as my forte is writing....)
ANYWAYS ... i digress.... Hope you have a good day! Take care of yourself!