Great game. The dialogue felt really professional and I could see it becoming a full-fledged Steam game if it was a bit longer. It was really nice how different colors represented unique levels of the monster world. The animations were pretty simple but nice and added to the vibe honestly. Especially the hurt animation. My favorite design was the pumpkin head.
For future revisions, it would be nice if you could talk to certain NPCs again. The fishing minigame felt a bit off in terms of item spawning, though I loved the apple catching one. Maybe there could be extra scenes and achievements if the player reaches a certain score.