Happy to see a new update! Was going through and reading some of the older parts to get a refresher, where would you like us to post about typos/proofreading mistakes? Just as an example, I found:
""Ted fidgets nervously when I ask, and I wonder if maybe asking him about their private chat was a bad idea."" (Tricky to format bc I typically put quotes around the quoted part of the text, but the error spotted was a set of quotation marks around a non-dialogue part of the text.)
Good catch on those quotation marks! I'll fix it for next time.
I'm always appreciative of mistakes being pointed out. If you find typos and gramatical errors, you can always leave them in a comment here. If there's stuff that you don't want to spoil, I think if you press Enter enough times and add a bunch of line breaks, then the part of your message afterwards will be hidden unless someone clicks it. That's what I've seen other people do at least.
Ah, I just meant if there was a discord or something like that that you preferred fans to use to notify you of this sort of thing. This is fine too! Just didn't know your preference, different authors different preferences and all that. Just one pair of quotation marks will be used this time unless that's a typo that pops up again. Tried to bold errors.
Spoilers
"Sometims I feel like I'm pretending. Like... if I'm just positive and make people smile, then everything will be fine." (Sometimes)
"Despite having been chocked and left with quick, raspy breaths now, I left feeling nothing but pleasure... well, and some pain as well." (choked)
"Caijoru crosses his arms and looks up at the sky, letting out a sigh. Despite he usual confident demeanor, he almost looks perturbed." (his)
"By now, you should be exausted from all of your running and shouting [cont.]" (exhausted)
"Huh? How would ruin our friendship?" (missing word, maybe "that" or "it"?; further context, rejecting Ted on the Ted - Reject route after Ted confesses after talking about Rix, Adrian, & co.)
"I pull Ted's tail with one hand and grab my now rock hard shaft with the other, guiding it down to the baise of his tail until I get to his opening." (base)
