For a demo and first timers, you guys did good.
Kudos for one of the main characters be balding and not Fred Durst-ing it! #ProudEdgingBalds
Minor nitpicks:
- Monster looks like Tingle (maybe that's intentional)
- Some shaders/materials look off (skin, alley floor, boat deck)
- Missing GI/AO? and/or shadows misaligned with models?
- Some clipping (socks clipping out of shoes on Anya, Korean girl's hair was overimposed on the cat on a scene?)
- UI needs work but is serviceable; Gothic font is unreadable sometimes.
- Ambient sound needs to default to 60-80%
Keep pitching tents, devs!