+ Instant use of languages, one of the elements that I enjoy the most.
+ Ooh Nadir! I know that place
+ Ah, the monomaniacal I...
+ Well-written dialogue here!
+ Oh, it just clicked! I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
+ This is brilliant. Such an inventive use of disparate existing world elements tied together into some really well-paced storytelling.
+ "It's time for a new adventure - dying" *Heavy metal guitar chord sounds*
+ And a solid ending.
Hell YES. I try not to play favourites, but this was pitched perfectly for me in terms of the kind of writing I enjoy, and it's definitely up there as far as Wildsea fiction goes.