Hi. I tried your AVN and I'm afraid I was not impressed.
On the positive side the character models were very beautiful and the quality of the graphics was quite high.
But I found the story hard to follow, I got bored early on and just stopped trying to track what was happening. I think I grew bored because I have seen other similar stories before, so I found the story to be uninspired.
I didn't think the MC was anything special or that he deserved all of the attention he was getting, I didn't know or care what his superpower was...
The only female character I was interested in at all was Ling and even then I'd be hard pressed to say what I liked about her apart from her general appearance. Personally I dont think that's a very good reason to like a girl, so I was quite disappointed in the female characters.
I think the choices are almost meaningless. They only seem to offer relationship points, which only lead to lewds. I dont think they will change the actual story in any way. I think I could take the most negative option possible in every choice, destroy every romance in the story and the end result would be exactly the same...
Next is a topic I find difficult. You see I really hate Eternum, so seeing a reference to it in your AVN was a massive turn off for me.
So for all of these reason I have to give your AVN 1 star and I cannot in good faith back you in any way.
I will trouble you no further.