The slight changes you made work nicely! As ever the twins are so adorable! Damn children and their suggestibility! XD Always to be able to hold another! :3
Aww! ROFL! Mind if we have the real names? Plz? X3 And lil one strikes again! True to be proud of oneself, but time and place! WOAH! That looks perfect! Hrm... Oph! XD Aww! Hehe so cute! ROFL! OH THIS SUPER CUTE!!! o.o Hrm... Daww! Woah o.o LAWL! ... never forget about the H-! too late... LMAO! x2!
No one should ever enjoy making others feel bad! Yet that can be used against us... Who says Heaven and Hell can't be the same thing? XP Never underestimate even an idiot! XD Oohh there a lot packed in here! Is it sad that despite being a wolf I'm happy its the wolf who got knocked down the most pegs? o.o ROFL ROFL UNCLE!!!
Hrm... Aww! Woah! o.o
God I can never breather with this VN! DX XD
I now have a feeling for how things are connected, but not quite enough to feel sure.