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Very cool ideas here! I'm loving reading through it so far.

Typo report: 

Page 11: "One such tool... are Foundation sentences" should be "is"

Page 13: "1 Tokens" should be "1 Token"

Page 13: "All Classes belong to one of seven Spheres" should be "nine Spheres"

Page 26: "I think I’m just about wrapped up my repairs" should be "I've just about" or "wrapped up with my repairs" (unless this is idiomatic in the speaker's dialect!)

Page 28: "Stick the conversation until Conflict occurs" should be "Stick to the conversation" (or maybe "Stick to conversation")

Page 28: "Finally, players and GMs should be 'always be thoughtful...'" should be "players and GMs should 'always be thoughtful...'"

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Great catches! I just made those fixes on my end and will be pushing them live shortly. Much appreciated!