I've said it before and I'll say it again. You've improved a LOT since Once in a Lifetime. And this update further cements that.
Writing is top notch, comedy is fucking perfect, there's tons of serious moments, mysterious ones, and incredibly romantic/wholesome ones too. The world building is great too. It includes an uncountable amount of interesting characters. The music fits each scene perfectly too.
Just... damn dude. Keep going. The amount of effort put into this is insane and should be celebrated.