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I know that the developer(s?) are going through some things right now but I believe they need to know that this was the first game to make me shed actual tears for the first time in many many years. Check my profile for a collection of other games... Mainly My Bully is My Lover, a bit of Eternum, and a bit of Once In a Lifetime. Those games got close to making me cry but didn't make me go all the way.  MBML had a lot of emotional moments in it and got me close to crying quite a few times.  While the other two almost made me cry at most 3 times each.

But... for some reason this game had me at that point MANY more times throughout it than MBML ever did. I think its the whole time travel thing, how well put the drama is, and all of the past interactions with everyone that the MC has had. It adds an incredible layer of attachment to the characters so when something happens you fucking feel it. I ended up actually crying at the end of chapter 25, which is something the previously mention games have never managed to do to me and I don't know why. Chapter 25 alone had me on the verge of tears maybe 4 to 5 times.

I feel that the developers should know that what they've made has had such an emotional impact on me. Something that they've created, most likely as a hobby or for fun, has moved me in such a way that many many maaaaannnyyy things before have failed to do. As such I have to say that I sincerely hope that whatever they are going through has a happy ending and that they continue to develop this masterpiece so that maybe I may cry some more while playing it down the line.

As weird as it sounds, thank you, for making me cry. I thought I had lost that ability 4 to 6 years ago. In addition I wish everyone involved good luck, better health, and that their life simply just becomes better.

Follow up. I just checked the patreon. EOLO is going through some shit rn. 

Don't know when Book 3 comes out nor do I know the usual release schedule but uhh... It looks like if you're a supporter you can get chapter 26 and 27 right now. No clue when they'll release publicly as I am not a supporter and cannot read the full posts which may or may not include public release dates.

Came here after playing all of the game to simply say "bump"

Especially since its been roughly 120 days since the games last update.

Ok, real quick and sorry in advance, but screw you for the sudden cliffhanger. Once again I'm sorry but that needed to be said as I've been looking forward to that reveal. (good thing I just need to wait a few days)

Anyways, 10/10 game. I love everything about it so far, lots of wholesome moments, quite a few sad ones too, lots of mystery and drama. Comedy's pretty great too. But I especially like how you've handled all the different mythological stuff too as well as the characters in general. There isn't a single character in this game that I don't find interesting in some way. Each of them are incredibly unique each with their own well-written pasts/stories and almost all of them seem to mesh fluidly into the main story as well either teaching you something about the world in general or just progressing the actual main story. Though that's technically always progressing. There's already a great deal of content in the game too and it's only just starting day 12 out of who knows how many. And 12 days doesn't even sound like a lot but these 12 days are packed full of content. Great game, love it so far and it's been immediately added to my list of favorites. Looking forward to more.

Nagisa is such a confusing creature and I love her for it.

Okay, I've played games with hidden objects that unlock images before but these hamsters are VERY well hidden. Thank god for that hint system or I wouldn't even know there's one on the screen.

Holy shit. I just finished part 1 of Chapter 1 Episode 1 and dear god. That was fucking phenomenal. I was skeptical at first, everything I read all across the internet said this game was outstanding. I wasn't skeptical about that, I could tell it was gonna be good just from looking at it and playing Sicae.

But they also said it was very emotional. That is what I was skeptical about but after experiencing Emma's story and reaching the previously mentioned point in the main story… I shouldn't have been skeptical at all. Holy shit did that throw me through every emotion possible, even brought me to tears a couple times too either frowning or smiling.

I will definitely be finishing this one when it comes out same with Sicae. 10/10

Apparently that's just a thing some stores do to prevent people shoplifting. I've never heard of it before playing this game either.

They sometimes have other changes but the general idea is that the compressed version has a lower quality overall, BUT a significantly smaller file size. Useful for saving space on your device, but the graphics might look worse or something.

Great update, absolutely loved it. I like the story, the fights, the whole concept of the Dark Ones is cool too, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Great job with this game, easily one of my favorites.

Just sticking a comment here as a form of bookmark, gotta check out the ones in this thread later.

There are some animations here and there but none for H-scenes right now. (i've only played up to chapter 44 I believe)

Animations for H-scenes are apparently planned to be added in at a later date.

:O

Correct. VR only.

Description says a desktop version "won't be ready for a couple of months or so."

The potion probably comes into play in a later version. 

So for now the answer is no, you don't miss anything YET.

Your best bet is to just download somebody's save.

Your second best bet is to turn on skip unseen text and just hold down ctrl until you find something you don't recognize.

That's called NTR and the vast majority of human beings in existence (roughly 99.99%) (me included) DESPISE that type of shit with every fiber of our being.

So the chances of that happening is so miniscule that it literally cannot be seen even by the most powerful microscope to ever exist.

Go look for different games, if you like that type of stuff.

If you're looking for some AVNs to get ideas from I heavily recommend Eternum and Once in a Lifetime. Eternum's the better of the two but OIALT is still worth checking out. I played through them recently and you might find something useful from them.

OIALT was Carbdis' first game right? I'd view it as his skills developing over time then, especially if you're comparing it to Eternum. You can even see his skills develop in OIALT. The lighting changes, the scenes get longer and better, environments become more unique, etc, etc. Especially the scenes and lighting. 

Eternum was made using everything he's learned from OIALT. And from what little I've played of Eternum so far, he's learned a LOT (Eternum's been pretty good so far, definitely an improvement)

Wow, just wow. I regret not playing this sooner. The whole game was a trip of emotions and I genuinely enjoyed every second of it. I also enjoyed seeing it improve throughout as you became gradually better at developing games. Shows that you put a lot of effort into it.

The story was pretty good and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice bit of mystery, nice bit of horror, a couple metric-fuck tons of romance. And I found that it was quite good and unique overall. I also enjoyed the little unique puzzles here and there.

I genuinely regret not playing this as soon as I saw it. If anyone's looking for a nice and simple story filled with wackiness, horror, and a LOT of romance, then look no further. 

Great job with this game. Looking forward to playing Eternum next!

Ok I wasn't expecting it and I can't say it due to it being massive spoilers but... Wow I was not expecting that at all lmao. 

The MC is [DATA EXPUNGED]

This story's got me hooked. Lots of mythological stuff in it and I love it. I like mythology enough to get really into games and stuff about it and seeing all the different mythologies mushed together like this is amazing. lots of Greek, Norse, and various other mythologies all combined. Great job so far lmao.

Gonna be honest, thought this was gonna be a virus cause of the installer (installers spook me a little). But after 3 virus scans and playing the game for a while, I was spooked for no reason at all. And I'm glad I was spooked for nothing too.

Incredibly well done VN built in a custom(?) engine or upon an already existing one. And it is a very good one too. Lots of various tfs, all with their own animations accompanying them (also quite well done) The models are very good too. A few bugs I've noticed, but they're easily solved by loading to a previous scene and skipping back ahead. (one is when Victoria starts talking into the intercom, she stops talking, it lets you move and you can't progress) AI images aren't too bad either.  I love the inclusion of the stats screen as well as the UI in general. 

As for the story, it seems pretty interesting so far. Can't talk too much about it since I'm just barely past the aforementioned Victoria part. Same goes for the characters as I haven't learned much about them yet. Overall, good shit I approve *thumbs up*

FMG = Female Muscle Growth 

AE = Ass Expansion 

PC...

Weird... I downloaded it minutes before posting that comment and I had access to Mirai's part. Looking at it now tho, it seems to be properly labeled/updated. So hey, guess its probably better now.

It has been updated, the download just still says part 5 instead of 6. Source: Just downloaded, installed, and played it myself.

Between the end of chapter 44 and 45 where it does the volume 3 recap. It's specifically during the recap.

In other news, chapter 45 and that trailer/preview/intro sequence was great. Already got me hooked for Kieran's arc (Right? it is her arc now? Then Ashley's or something? I vaguely remember reading that somewhere, probably the discord)

Still amazed at how this game keeps grabbing my attention. I finish an arc, I go into a state of hibernation waiting for the full release of the next arc, I get curious and I end up playing a chapter of it just to see what I'll be getting into... and then I want to play it update-by-update instead of my usual "wait for the whole season" approach. Great shit as always *thumbs up*

"Don't you dare scroll back, I'll know"

* immediately scrolls back *

* "No" option's no longer there *

That ANNIHILATED me for some reason lmao

Just saw the second boss and I love it. Huge fan of those games, lovely reference.

This update has already been pretty great but that just made it even better lmao. Great game so far, love it.

Its not everyday you find an AVN tailored to a more... unique... fetish (fmg in this case) AND is overall pretty good. Usually people tend to focus more on the unique part and less on the actual game. But this one didn't seem to do that. It instead made each part pretty great.

Short Version: It has a pretty good story that reminds me of a Yakuza game for some reason. (But with a female protagonist) Pretty good characters so far with each one being completely different to the others and having completely different personalities. It also has that touch of mystery I seem to enjoy so much. It even has combat which was the best I've seen in a Ren'Py game so far. I'm honestly impressed the dev managed that as most struggle to bend Ren'Py to their will. Oh, it also uses AI images and they're not too bad, little bit funny here and there, but nothing too major (plus there's a re-design coming up so whatever)

Longer Version:

The story is basically the plot of a Yakuza game, at least I think it is. Woman who was living a simple life gets asked for help by her brother to help save the family gym from being shut down. In the process she (basically) becomes insane and creates 2 imaginary friends who help her along the way (A shoulder angel and shoulder demon), meets a pretty varied cast of characters with quite a few of them being total goofballs, and ends up getting involved with the Mafia. There's also a lot of comedic moments thrown throughout which only fuels my "this is similar to a Yakuza game" mindset. And I like it!

The characters are pretty good too. Gina is the protag who is pretty intelligent, most of the time. Most of her personality is up to the player to decide, but I believe her default is "Kind, caring, composed, sometimes a little bit rude." I don't want to say too much more about the characters since most of it's actually revealed through your interactions with them, but I can give a small description. Mike - Small rude gym guy, Enzi - Medium gym guy wearing a loincloth, Jonathan - Big gym guy who's weirdly polite, Greg - MASSIVE gym guy who's also your brother and Xici - some white haired girl. Each one drastically different than the other and having their own unique motivators for what they do.

Can't talk about the touch of mystery as that'd kinda ruin it.

The combat arrives about 60% to 75% of the way through the game's current content (V 0.2) But it's surprisingly well made for a Ren'Py game! It's kind of styled like an older JRPG, like the original FF7 for instance. 3 party members, items, abilities, and ally commands. Little confusing at first, but I instantly figured it out in my first fight. It also requires a bit of strategy too, so I'd say the current fights are quite balanced.

My only problem with the game would have to be the silence. No music, no sounds.  So I'd recommend letting your own music run in the background or ignoring the silence until some gets made/put in. Other than that, even if you aren't into fmg (the unique fetish in question) I bet you'd still enjoy the game. I'm interested to see where this goes, so it's got my approval!

If you're still having problems, or have similar problems in the future, try downloading it from F95 using one of the links provided there. You'll need an F95 account in order to see the links tho.

Yeah, complete EVERY event with EVERY girl, then visit the stones and "do the thing to go to the place" until there's no more scenes there. Then the mission should tell you to go to the stones.

So in the tunnels how are you supposed to get to that room in the top left? I got to the room with the window but I can't get to the other side of said window no matter how hard I look.

Edit: Nevermind, I found it.

Just finished the current update and read that little after talk and it only made my view on the game better. You've got my support on any future updates/games you make! It's nice to see that you have a LOT of support from a LOT of cool people too. Don't be afraid to ask for help from them, especially if you're new to this (I know I'd be asking for help if I recently started developing games, or maybe I wouldn't because I can be fairly shy sometimes)  But so far, you've been doing great so keep going! *insert thumbs up here*

Is it just me or is there an Out of Touch reference when Celeste and Pah talk? 

*about 15 lines later*

Yes, yes there is. Love it. You instantly earned a point from me just because of that.

In all seriousness, love the game so far. It's got Overlord vibes (Looking at you Lord Z), humor, and so far the characters and story seem pretty good. I especially like the game's (pretty much two) protagonists. Wes and Pah. As well as that gold knight.

Quick question, so currently there's a few animations later in the game (as I've read in the comments), are you planning on updating all the scenes to be animated at some point or only have the new ones be animated? The story and characters are already enough to keep me entertained and the scenes are already good enough without being animated to the point where I could simply live without animations if you decide not to do them.

Anyways, pretty good stuff so far. Looking forwards to any future updates you put out.

From what little of it I've played (pretty good so far btw), I've come to understand that Vanhi is a manipulative bitch who especially enjoys manipulating and deceiving Pah. So I'd say yes, she is supposed to say that. Then immediately like 5 lines later, your choice actually comes in to play.

Glad I'm not the only person who gives the characters their own voices lol.

Animations are planned to be added later. If you want to see what they might look like check out Tropicali which was used as the developers' testing ground for animations.

I believe you just extract the zip into the "Out of Touch" folder, then take whatever is in the "Update" folder and move it into the "Out of Touch" folder. Oh, and choose to replace the files.

Alright, time for my actual review of this that everyone can see.

Phenomenal in almost every way. The animations are top-notch, the best of the best. The characters are pretty unique too and all of them have drastically different stories, character development, and personalities than the others. I love Ryoko, Charlotte,  Akane, Yui... shit, I love all of them. They all feel different and they all change a little in their own unique ways throughout the story so far, not to mention they're all truly unique and not just copies of others. 

Speaking of the story, it's basically a playable Isekai anime. OP but semi-incompetent protagonist (with his OWN unique character development and personality that is honestly very enjoyable) who seduces basically hundreds of women and somehow gets involved in a lot of random bullshit at the same time. It can also be very humorous at times as well with various funny references and nods to modern day anime, fetishes, TV shows, video games, the list goes on. There's a Skyrim reference, a Jujutsu Kaisen reference, and even a Konosuba reference, all of which made me chuckle a little. I don't want to say anymore because it'll spoil some stuff but I will say it can be quite emotional or sad at times. That, and there's a bit of a mystery element to it. Combine everything about the story and it hits literally every check on my list, Isekai is an optional one that rewards bonus points since OoT hits every check as well and its not an Isekai.

Ncrow seems to be pretty cool and quite skilled despite a few English spelling and grammar mistakes. A lot of them were fixed in the most recent update (0.2.9) judging from my quick scroll through the intro again, so no need to worry about that too much as they'll eventually be properly fixed/translated. Most of the ones that remain in the game don't really harm it in any way at all.

Overall, phenomenal game, phenomenal developer. I highly recommend this to anyone looking for excellent animations or an excellent story.