Sorry, I don’t have much to say besides how is this “beginner?” This is too awesome for beginner work!
…actually I have a couple things to say:
-Motif use is fine but doesn’t really go beyond “A part then B part.” Everything else ramps up in complexity (and the build up/drop is pretty rad) but the motif itself stays mostly the same throughout. Try exploring different patterns, maybe having it “break down” along with everything else?
-When you loop it, it “loops” like a song that shouldn’t be looped in a game.
Great job! …OKAY I have one more thing to say
-This is more of a personal taste thing, but the mixing is a bit iffy; the kick doesn’t feel punchy enough and the lead synth sounds too loud/overpowering the rest of the mix… but what do I know I’m cheeks at mixing too and I don’t write dubstep so I’ll shut up