This is awesome! I love the way you incorporated the motif, and the intro sets up the rest of the piece really well. Great job!!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Production | #6 | 4.077 | 4.231 |
| Interest | #14 | 3.558 | 3.692 |
| Overall | #16 | 3.439 | 3.569 |
| Cohesiveness | #17 | 3.854 | 4.000 |
| Use of Motif | #26 | 3.039 | 3.154 |
| Game-Readiness | #32 | 2.668 | 2.769 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Ok, I agree, this is not beginner-level production at all. It should be either intermediate or advanced! Insane dubstep vibe though! I want to say: teach me haha!
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Jumping Lemuria.mp3Sorry, I don’t have much to say besides how is this “beginner?” This is too awesome for beginner work!
…actually I have a couple things to say:
-Motif use is fine but doesn’t really go beyond “A part then B part.” Everything else ramps up in complexity (and the build up/drop is pretty rad) but the motif itself stays mostly the same throughout. Try exploring different patterns, maybe having it “break down” along with everything else?
-When you loop it, it “loops” like a song that shouldn’t be looped in a game.
Great job! …OKAY I have one more thing to say
-This is more of a personal taste thing, but the mixing is a bit iffy; the kick doesn’t feel punchy enough and the lead synth sounds too loud/overpowering the rest of the mix… but what do I know I’m cheeks at mixing too and I don’t write dubstep so I’ll shut up
Hi, thank you for the kind words! I put beginner based on the description as I believe I didn’t meet the other 2 categories but yes I actually have produced music since 2015 so I have a bit of experience 😅
I greatly appreciate the feedback though! I was pressed for time as I spent the weekend with my family so cranked out what I could as quick as I could. Definitely could have made it a lot better but by the time I got most of it done I was just ready to submit and knock out lol.
Thanks for taking the time to listen to it and for the criticism, I always welcome it! 😊🙏🏻
loved the breakbeat and the little dubstep feel, very cool
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Forest Fantasy // Motif Jam III am an absolute sucker for a cheeky little breakbeat. And boy oh boy you suckered me. It's giving fall guys ost but if it had taste and class. Love them cheeky little ragga sirens as well, production overall is massive. Kinda making me regret not chopping some breaks for this myself. Big up
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Jaunty Village theme
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