One in a million game here. Shit gets real and reflects dystopian Real Life.
4th Wall breaking and other jokes bring levity, but there is a very hardened storyline (like most AVNs), showing how, like most titles, it is a kinetic story w/makeup.
I never hold back on comments, good or bad, so I’ll say it bluntly. It reminds me of the Apocalyptic Times we are in, and it strangles my Tie. This may, I hope, need the mythic “ #nsfl “ tag.
Jason, the production thinly veils what many of us once wrote off as “fantasy”, fantasies that one can find in newspaper articles & medical papers IRL. Perfect delivery of terrifying truth!
Thank you for painting the #Snowpiercer of this decade. Just… make it truly Dynamic, w/meamingful choices. I get the restraints -the dragon- has on production as The Eagle signs its half of The Marble’s Swan Song, but this point is moot considering the glacial pace of production that may not render completion before Apollyon’s march.
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Veery Realistic (so far). Keep it that way, make even more reliable than Bitchute or X! A man wrote the world’s most terrifying Book from #Patymos some millemia ago, maybe you can find inspiration there, at least from 1 angle.
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The pace is prohibitively slow. Hurry it up.
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Grammar used is actually high quality here, very succinct! Top Shelf!
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The story is still very short, so you have time to craft in life-altering & truly direction-altering) choices. Do so!
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In 1 year, only 1 update. You mentioned “resetting” the quality. Now it’s “upgraded”, hurry! Good images & great English. You leveled up. Done. Good job. Now, hurry! You can do it! You MUST do it!