This is my first time participating in a jam too, so I understand how important feedback is.
I liked your work, from the point of view of composition it is very well constructed music, there is interesting work with timbres, instruments, layering of melodies, in short what makes composition a creative process. It's beautiful!
The only ‘minus’ is just a temporary not fully mastering the possibilities of mastering to create a more voluminous and professional sound. I'm on that path too, so I understand from the inside, so to speak.
Thank you for your music!