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It's just incredible work on so many levels. Firstly, the fact that you've used a recording of live instruments that you've also made yourself... that's impressive! Secondly, you've built a whole story in the music, which is meant to create an atmosphere. It feels great.

Well, and, of course, the music itself. Great sense of the development of the material, the feel of the music. The selection of instruments clearly matches the content of the music exactly.
I am in love, thank you for your music!

Thank you for your comment! I found this jam when it was 11 hours left to submit and when I saw the theme I just immediately thought about Atlantis and here the water is, haha

I'm glad that you like my work, great point about  microtones, thank you :3

Thank you a lot for your warm and beautiful words! I'm very glad that you like it :3 

Thank you! I'm glad that I made that water city vibe in your imagination :3

To me, the theme music sounds a bit weighty at the beginning, but you have built a clear and distinct structure, in my opinion the track sounds good.

I saw your lost city as a city that is lost to the world, but where robotic life is boiling. It's very cool!
Thank you, it was a pleasure to spend time with your music!

A very pleasant impression was left by your music. Beautiful guitar chords, wind sounds that at times even evoke the feeling of either a rippling field or water that is somewhere nearby. It's beautiful.
I'm not sure how much I felt exactly the lost city, but the music is certainly talented, I enjoyed stopping and relaxing to your track.
Thank you for your music!

You have managed to create not just a composition, but exactly a ‘state’. Personally, I prefer music with development, but I liked your work. It's a very talented sound design, it's not just a bunch of sounds, I like the resulting dense sound structure.

Regarding how well it fits the theme of the jam, I think you managed to convey the right image. I felt like a seeker who has already found the lost city and found himself in the midst of it, with questions, perplexed and embraced by some mystical feelings.
Thank you for your music!

Thank you for your comment! I really appreciate your advices and will try to make it in my project. 

Glad you like it, thanks! 

Great job!

It's a beautiful music piece. You are very clear on what tools to use to achieve the right atmosphere. The ambient came out wonderful! I like the way the sounds are mixed, I like that there is nothing superfluous and yet you can feel the volume and fullness of sound and content.
Cool, thanks for giving such a vivid picture in my head with your music!

That's very good advice, thank you! I know, my mixing skills is not my confident part and thank you so much for your vision from this point, I really appreciate it! 

Thank you, glad you like it ♥

Thank you, I am so happy that you like it and thank you for pointing out the atmosphere and how I made it♥

Thanks for your comment, I am glad that you like it!
Yes, I wanted to add some panoramic settings and add some special sounds into ear, so nice that you said about that :3
Thank you!

I really enjoyed this gentle adventure you took me on with your music. It's relaxing without being impersonal, which is very important. You are right to take pride in your work! There's nothing unnecessary here, there's no sound for sound's sake, to create an imaginary atmosphere. Everything is super in terms of composition!

I love the work with the timbres, I love how balanced the sound is, it's just love.

Also, I can't help but mention what a beautiful cover you have, haha.

Thank you, glad I found this work in my wanderings!

I liked the music, you managed to convey the atmosphere. In my mind I saw a city abandoned after a technical tragedy, haha, just wanted to share the impression.

Thank you, it was interesting!

This is my first time participating in a jam too, so I understand how important feedback is.

I liked your work, from the point of view of composition it is very well constructed music, there is interesting work with timbres, instruments, layering of melodies, in short what makes composition a creative process. It's beautiful!

The only ‘minus’ is just a temporary not fully mastering the possibilities of mastering to create a more voluminous and professional sound. I'm on that path too, so I understand from the inside, so to speak.

Thank you for your music!

I don't even know what to say. Your work is one of the best I've listened to at this jam.
Everything is beautiful here - marvelous timbres (both in sound quality and in the feeling of how well they fit the meaning of the music), great sound design, beautifully constructed composition in which ambient doesn't just consist of pulling one chord throughout the entire track.
A wonderful piece of work, thank you for painting a world in my head.

I love that you immersed me in the atmosphere of your work, not only with the music but also with the descriptions to it. It's very creative work and I think it's always a plus when people share not just a general description of the music, but truly immerse the listener in their world.

In my opinion this is true ambient, great sound design, it's very easy to hear the nuances you talk about in the description. It's simple to build this Lost City in your head.

A marvelous piece of work!

Stunning work, I really enjoyed the composition, the development of the internal drama and the way my emotions followed the story. There's a great share of bird sounds that create the atmosphere.

Your description of the music absolutely matches my impressions and associations.

The development of the strings theme made me want to smile, it's really great. I also really enjoyed the development and use of the different chord harmonies.

Thank you for your beautiful music, I am in love!

Thank you for your listening! 

Yes, I found out that piece cut off badly only after I add it here, haha. It will be my lesson to the future :)

It's still sounds great, good job ❤️

Oh, I really liked your work. It feels like an adventurer is entering a lost place. I liked how the panorama works, it creates a very necessary and cool effect. And also the use of bells and choir - that's my favorite.

It fits the theme and sounds really cool!

Thanks for this experience!

For some reason, when listening to it, I had the feeling that there was nothing left of the city, despite the search, it evokes a strong emotion, I liked it. I'm just sharing my association with you. I liked the development of the music, its volume and compositional integrity.

Thank you for your music!

It's always a joy to listen to orchestral music in the context of creating ambient.
In my opinion, the music is very consistent with the theme of the jam, and your description is very accurate, my associations were the same as you described.

Thank you for your music, I liked it!

I liked your music. The sounds used for the background are, so to speak, ideal, they fit perfectly, I am simply delighted, plus the panorama works interestingly with the listener.
The only thing is that it seems to me that the timbre and intonations of the main descending theme in a narrow range are not quite suitable, they rather evoke associations with a spaceship than with ancient ruins, but this is only my impression and I do not insist that it is true for everyone.

In terms of composition, everything is done well and you can feel the immersion. I also cannot help but say how atmospheric the video sequence is, I really liked it.

Thank you for this experience and your music!

I liked how you achieved surround sound using simple and accessible plugins. I liked everything about the composition, the only thing is that sometimes the regularity of the strings knocked me off the dreamy mood, but maybe that's just my impression and it doesn't make your music worse, that's for sure!

In my opinion, the music matches the theme very good. I'll share my associations with you - when listening, I had the feeling that I was an adventurer or an archaeologist who finally found what he had been looking for for a long time. The picture is also well chosen.

Thank you for your music!