thank u!! The language sounds strange because both my native language and the translator's native language are Chinese. This seems unavoidable, haha? But I will consider adding better translation versions in the future!! And this demo has been released for quite some time now, and I realize that it has many shortcomings. I'm glad you still encourage me to do these things. Thanks again.
Ah, yes. That explains it.
I recall translating a fanfic from chinese once, and the term "bend like a shrimp" came up. 😂
It is a mysterious language indeed.
If you want my suggestion; Get Grammarly.
I use it to proofread my fanfiction and short stories.
It help catch grammatical errors as well as spelling errors, and it's free.
It's not quite a beta reader, but it might help you out a bit.