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I played one run and got captured then game over'd after my second fight against goblins, which are very cute. didn't see any cursed items. I could certainly see myself going back to play more. Here's some notes I took while playing:

- Apple stealing is good, I wish I could steal more of them

- Good note on the magical gate mechanism having receptacle for elements on two different sides. that also proved a good way to get me to look at the menus and abilities available to me

- Entering past that gate rotated my direction of travel 90 degrees: Enter going left, continue going up. Might not be possible to change that now, but best to keep direction of movement consistent in future

- I like all the stuff being interactable and getting dialogue responses

- Music looping is abrupt

- Distance mechanic in combat could be interesting, I like it instinctively

- Cool ass music on the piano

- I suspect these adorable silly goblins are placeholder. if so I hope their design doesn't change too much

- The QTEs are an interesting twist on RPG combat

- Spell circle and getting teleported to jail was rather abrupt

- Often there's no indication of confirmation when you do something. You have two moves in combat but on completing the first of two there should probably be a sound effect and visual effect or something to show that

- I think if you order a manoeuvre to a different distance, the spells available should change to reflect the new distance

Wow, a lot to reply to! One of the most fun parts of releasing this demo is all these comments. As an artist before this, I grew used to people being so quiet and shy, but this is great! Truly, thank you.

The apple-stealing is in part a matter of balance (a Noble Festa Apple is a full recovery of your Willpower) and in part simply because Gentiana as a character would only take one. I've tried to confine the player's actions to "what would Gentiana do" - in the hopes I can keep the scope of development reasonable but still varied and prepared for many types of player. Sometimes the boundaries are because I as a developer did not think of something, but sometimes the answer is simply that "Gentiana wouldn't do that". And that is just the result of needing to draw the line somewhere.

The tutorial is both some of my worst and best work. I broke a game design guideline by making it very early in development. It's often wisest to work at first on the middle of a game and then branch out, but I only partially did this. The tutorial is in some ways most purely reflective of my design philosophy and in other ways showcasing just how new to this I really am.

When I design areas, I rarely if ever place things without a purpose. I have a lot of fun hiding away dialog and characterization and even items in strange places. I think one of the best examples of my approach is the bunk beds throughout the Monster Cave. Most if not all of them provide different pieces of dialog from Gentiana, sometimes producing different dialog when interacting with different parts of the same bed.

I hadn't given much consideration to how the music loops, so I will have to look into how most games solve the problem of abrupt looping. Nice catch!

There is, as of now, no placeholder art in the game. At least, not that I can recollect. My art is rough and unusual as I'm still quite new to drawing, but I intend to stick with most if not all of what I have drawn. A day might come where I take another pass through the game, but I only want to do that if my skill has significantly increased and quite a bit later at that. I have seen too many beloved projects fall to perfectionism and I know I am not immune to that myself.

The spell circle is abrupt - I think I want to make the hint for it more clear. Feedback suggests I hid it away in an obnoxious way. I want people to be thinking about what they're doing and treading very carefully, and my priority is a dungeon that feels dangerous more so than fair. But I think the entry of the Monster Cave in general is poorly communicated and I intend to clean it up.

I suppose when when I say the magic circle is abrupt, I mean I'm exploring the dungeon, then am quickly effectively teleported to an open prison to... continue exploring the dungeon. there's also a similar sudden transition when first heading into her pocket dimension home with the armchair

other thing: jumping the rocks was a good intro to the QTEs. is there a way to cross that with magic? I hadn't much understood the magic system at that point

Ah, I'm sorry - I misunderstood you! Yes, that scene ends suddenly and unusually, I agree. I'll keep it in mind and take care to change it when I update the demo one last time.

As for the rocks, there is actually a way to cross the river with magic. You can cast Ice beside the sign which suggests there used to be a bridge across the river. Casting Ice in this way produces an ice bridge for the player to cross. My intent with the river was to teach there is rarely one solution, you can make your path forward easier by thinking about it, and the route which plays into Gentiana's talents best (the one that involves magic) is typically easiest.

To counterbalance this, I know there is at least one case where using magic doesn't help. Encouraging players to consider a new and odd mechanic like this without accidentally teaching to assume it's always the solution is a challenge I'm struggling with, and I hope I have succeeded here.