I am not intending to rate everyone's entry, but I noticed that you had a low number of ratings. And that while you won last time! So I just had to check it out ;)
I dig this! It is eerie, not too distracting (so e.g. fitting a scenario where the main character talks to the man about to destroy everything), quite mysterious, and building up nicely. It fits the theme very well and is executed well too. Nicely done :D