Oh my, this was interesting!
There’s a monster in your house, or is there?
SPOILERS
I'm going to start saying the hand-drawn scans are great. The little animations are very well made, and the aesthetic choices are on point. This game is very pretty.The overall idea of the story is also interesting. A story told in such a way that one part of the story reflects the other part of the story. That was really neat!
There was a bit of a mood dissonance with the neighbor. They were screaming at first, and suddenly turn very understanding and provide story exposition when talking directly with Carlos. I feel that if the monster’s background had stayed a mystery it would have added to the story.
Also, this is more of a me-thing but if the tone at the monster’s presentation had been more neutral or creepy, the monster’s harmlessness and cuteness would have been a nice surprise by the middle/end.
Everything else was great. The reflection of the monster with Carlos in particular added big weight to the story.
Overall, this is a very good story!