Very gentle piece, I think it works great as an ambience track with illuminating, full of hope and sense of wonder qualities. I also digged the small sounds you included to give texture and punctuate the sweeping strings. The only thing I noticed could be improved is the drone percussion kind of clock sound. It sounds a tad mechanic and resembling too much a metronome, distracting a bit the listener from the music itself. I found the sound palette also chosen wisely, with a "less is more" approach, but filling the soundscape with enough meat for my ears to be fulfilling but not distracting. Good job!