Very nice take pretty simple yet it works for ambiant pretty well. Now feedback, the mix sound very great actually good job on that its very well balanced. The clav is probably too dry and too much in your face, there is also some random accidentals at the end of some notes. I like the use of leitmotivits a nice touch. Ending with the clav is a bit questionnable imo the notes thats being played unless its intentional I would revisit those a bit. Other than that its actually pretty cool and very listenable, good job :)