i enjoyed the story and artwork! going with the interpretation of using your words to affect others was great for what you went for. it was interesting seeing how the different leaders would react and speak to the villagers.
something strange that happens is i'll stick to the walls if i jump and move into them, and there was also a moment on the far right wall where that caused me to fall through the floor and into the abyss... so i had to reset.
congrats on the project of course! i enjoyed it a lot!