I'm not an Arthur man, but, I must admit that that scene in the glowing waters was beautiful artistically and the written words were touching too. I was hoping to speak to Nomax, but I ended up pretty satisfied with the update after Arthur's scene alone even if Wolf route is going through a rough patch. Great job on the art, truly a set of amazing pieces with Arthur and the Wolf + Raj variations!
I fear I may have missed a few typos, seeing as I kinda forgot about proofreading, but, what I recalled is here.
"I wouldn not dare claim otherwise. I am happy to stay in the realm of beauty and leave mathematics to more capable individuals like yourself, Mr. Hudson."
"Small...
useless...
Just as Arthur assumes you to be." (capitalization on 'useless', though uncertain if this was intended to be stylistic)
"The wind has dutifully moved ships since time immemorial. And besides, sir - would you sleep comfortably knowing there's a blazing furnace sitting below deck, waiting for a stray spark to ignite it" (missing question mark)
"Navy ships already have to deal with etensive precautions to minimize the chance of the magazine storage igniting and blowing up the ship. [cont.]"
"I don't think there's time time-"
"Well, I'm a Spaniard if the name and accent hadn't fooled you, but that doesn't mean I know my way around a little Moorish." (Given context after, Torres does know a little Moorish (given that is the language 'Ahlan' is from) thus double negative would be fine here)
"There's got to be some other reputable ships there. Maybe a few criss-crossing the mediterranean if I still needed to learn the ropes." (capitalization)
"Hey, big guy! Don't didn't anybody teach you any manners?" ()
"I'm a good listenener."
"It feels like almost a minute passes as the boat sways lazily, raindrops falling one after another, the time between them getting slowly growing longer." (Unsure if this is technically wrong as opposed to just being kind of awkwardly worded, personally I'd cut 'getting' here.)
Also, not a typo but man... I hadn't read the Leave path for Wolf when I first started my typo collecting and ooooof Wolf is just the king of breaking hearts over and over...