I gave it another try and managed to complete it with another handful of plays. On my end, I think the issue was that I was using the dodge to try to run away while (if I understand it right) it's meant to be quickly turned on and off. It also feels a bit slower to respond than dodges I'm used to. I'd love to see you play it, maybe there's something you do that's obvious with dev insight that might not be as obvious for someone coming in blind.