This was so cute!! I loved the gameplay loop, it felt easy to understand and made me feel active in the world. I adored the colors and aesthetics so much, I was laughing and giggling throughout it. I really appreciated how detailed the art was in the backgrounds as well. All of the small animations where really beautiful, noteably the potion bottle from Dahlia and the way things sometimes flew around.
I've never used Renpy so I'm not terribly familiar with the engine but this ran smoothly and I didn't run into any bugs! The UI was clean and clear and the music was really sweet. I especially liked the tender track with the vocalizations near the end.
The almost B plot of the war and the demon lord felt like it fit the world and was also felt self aware and silly haha. It was fun, felt almost like a pastel themed scooby-doo episode, if that makes sense. Really great job yall!!