In the original PDF, the dark pink bg with light pink text is very hard to read; there's not enough contrast. The accessible PDF is much appreciated for that reason.
Aside from that, a page saying how many players are needed & what items are needed to play the game, along with setup, would really help clarify things. I'm also a bit confused about the game mechanics and the possible setting(s). What are "active mental states"? Why would I roll for something like heart rate?
The bones of a great game are here, but it doesn't feel fully fleshed out yet. I look forward to seeing more of this!