Aww I loved this, the art was so detailed and the aesthetics of the world is not only SO original feeling but really really cool. Felt like, nautical punk almost haha. I think if I could give pointers I wanted more visual distinction in the text boxes for who was talking when (like color changes or font or placement, idk), but that's a very small thing in an otherwise grand package -and ultimately a personal preference, there's no right or wrong way to do art. Excited to see the rest!