Hey, thanks for the reply! If MC would check everything, he'd be perfect and I don't want him to be perfect. He should look inexperienced, overwhelmed and a bit naive at the beginning. Naomi, the nurse, is telling him what to be expected after the accident and she has to know about it since she's the nurse in charge, right?
MC didn't pay for 69 years, in fact - it's unknown why this happens at all, if you play the game differently, there will be no mentioning of renting her for 69 years at all. ;D The bot has to report to the docking station for an upgrade though, so he also fears that they'll find out that he used her for free more than once (another fear to be found out).
He doesn't want to include Lucy in any potential trouble, I think that's to be expected from a guy like him. Could write another path for it, but I don't have enough variables at the current state to have a clear path forward on how he turns out at the end. What else should he do at the end? Not going to sleep? :D He even tries to think about Lilith at the end, but his brain starts to hurt as soon as the thought appears.
Just my two cents lol, anyway, glad you like the small details I included! I enjoy seeing the world live in the background and having other things , even small events, happening is kinda nice to see, imo. :)