Hello, I absouletely love the story you are trying to tell with this game. The mystery about you (the protagonist) ending up in that place and even your search for others like you and family members are actually elements I really enjoyed to have and was an unexpected plot but so well welcomed. Maybe the school ambtience is kinda cliche but you know, it works, Im kinda curious what other kind of places we will explore in next chapthers.
Also I love male preds so I absolutely adored when I first dicovered that being a route planned for the protagonist, I feel kinda bad for eating that guy in the subway, but actually, I imagined we will being able to choose not digesting him and like, I don't know , leaving him there for some time until we decide what to do with him and just at the end of the day when we are at home, we remember he is still there and have a little scene with him, perhaps we ended up digesting him finally or maybe let him stay with us as a roomate until we discover how to turn him back to moral size, maybe he secretaly loved it becuase it resemblences something that happens in WOW or something.
Anyways, just here to say some of my initial toughts about this project, a bit of fanfiction XD and to wish the best. Good stuff!
PD: Don't thnik I didnt see the Jojo reference, it was hilarious