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This game actually?? what even?? the plot twists everywhere? the suspicious highly intriguing characters?? the way the choices are so plentiful and creative you cant even tell what path you're going down on? truly i thought i was doing amazing until i got the bad end on the first run..made me very emotional so i had to write this out immediately. My heart burns. (haha get it because- *include spoilers*)

edit: MIGHT I ADD. GOD THE DESIGNS?? spent a whole HOUR admiring the details?? i hope the good end doesn't leave me feeling too empty afterwards haha..

Mazesmelody1 day ago(+1)

Hi..i thought the devils end was bad..uhm. dont provoke cari too much 💗

Mazesmelody1 day ago(+1)

Just polished off the entire game, wow. uhm. definitely feeling empty, 10/10. Looking forward to updates!!

Mazesmelody1 day ago(+1)

okay overall rating with spoilers because i love yapping and from my extensive research i saw that the dear creator likes being critiqued. Im a diehard fan of romantic horror/romance with gore elements/symbolism and i'd love if there was more so it leads up to the very surprisingly gore-y ending, i also feel that there wasn't enough character or rather personality per se from mc when cari was being an absolute asshole. (though very justified after learning of the lore) Personally, i would've lovvveedddd a angsty little "im sadly retreating to my room instead of/after trying to argue because im just a little familiar to him after all" scene only for cari to (somehow) swallow his endless pride and come apologize..or pull an asian mom and atleast bring fruits or something godamn.. ALSO CAN I JUST SAY as soon as i came across izar i knew he was suspicious as hell. I love the irony of picking out a dove for his familiar form and the way he argues with mc in their head i gigglledd..its highly impressive how you managed to cook and serve that lengthy near perfection game in just a month. Thank you for your numerous efforts! now onto experiencing the rest of your games..

saiyohara1 day ago

I LOVE UUUU YOU ARE THE BEST!! you’re correct i love comments and i love critique and i love yapping so this is like the best present ever YAYY!!! thank you so much for taking the time to write not just one, but FOUR comments. i feel like not many people gaf too much about this game (sad) so you have made my day!

the bad ending is, well. quite bad. which is hopefully incentive to get the good ending! and i am SO in love with our artist’s designs too like long haired cari…. ooooh….

and thank you so much for all the feedback!!! let me go over them all

okay yes absolutely will do more gore/horror buildup! i promiseeee it’s because we had to do this in a month i will revise and fix it up!
yesss so spoilers! i envisioned it as cari’s evil yandere side being more influenced by the devil (lol) but i def want to work on his evil side and give a little spice to his personality
and AHHHH true!! i love the idea of the sadly retreating/i’m nothing to you…” and i absolutely want to add more scenes too that lead up to the ending! he’s 100% asian mom coded he can barely apologize and he gets mad at u unreasonably sometimes…
LOLLL i guess izar wasn’t subtle at all! i think i wrote him to be like a black swan but dove also works too if i messed up somewhere? like you are NOT subtle bro. and YAYYY i was worried no one would get that the voice in mc’s head (every single case of italics that aren’t for emphasis, actually) is literally just izar popping in. get out of my head get out of my head get out of my head….
thank you thank you!!! i am super happy you enjoyed and hope you enjoy the other games too :D no joke you have made me SO HAPPY i fear this game has been flopmaxxing failcoring in my mind so you make me very glad we stuck through and made it anyways >_<

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